So fist in stave three in "A Christmas Carol" Scrooge has just woken up and Scrooge was getting his thoughts together. Scrooge was nervous, but was prepared for almost everything, but when the clock hit one, no spirit or shape appeared, but Scrooge was taken with a violent fit of trembling. Minutes past and nothing came yet. Scrooge began to think that the source secret of his ghostly light might be adjoining room and it seem to shine. So Scrooge got up and went to the door, but then when Scrooge hand was on the lock then someone called his name and bade him enter and Scrooge obeyed.
It was Scrooge room, but then the room changed, so the walls and ceiling were so hung with living green that it looked like a perfect grove. Then the ghost came and told Scrooge to come in to know him better. Then Scrooge came in and then the ghost was wearing a green robe bordered with white fur, its feet observable beneath the ample folds of the garment and on its head it wore no other covering than a holly wreath. Its dark brown curls were long and free and its genial face, its sparkling eye, its open hand, its cherry voice, and it's joyful air. Then the Spirit told Scrooge to touch his robe and Scrooge did, then Scrooge ask that if there was a peculiar flavour in what your sprinkle your torch.
Then the spirit said there was and it was his own, and Scrooge said that he gives it to anyone and then the spirit said he gives it to a poor one most. Then Scrooge said that why does he give it to the poor ones the mist and the spirit said because they need it the most. Then Scrooge was invincible just like he was promised then the spirit and Scrooge went inside Bob Cratchit's house and when the spirit got in, he went to go bless him with his torch. Then up rose Mrs. Cratchit and she was dressed out, but poorly in a twice turned gown , but brave in ribbons. She was laid the cloth, assisted by Belinda and she was the second daughter.
And Master Peter Cratchit was eating and and two other younger kids came in and they were a boy and a girl. Then Martha came and Mrs. Cratchit was happy to see her because she was very late and she works. Then Bob came and Martha hid herself from her and Bob was wondering where she was then she came right into his arms, after Bob told them that Tiny Tim was growing big and strong, but the only thin g was that his voice was trembling when he said that. Then they began to eat and then Bob said Merry Christmas, then Tiny Tim said "God Bless us everyone", then Scrooge told the spirit if he will live and the spirit said no. Scrooge begged the spirit, but he said no.
In my opinion you can tell that Scrooge regrets and he feels bad for Tiny Tim because he knows that he is going to die. Also Scrooge know that it is all his fault if tiny Tim dies because the family can not afford medicine. In my opinion the spirit seems a little nicer from the one before because he has a cheerful voice. I hope Tim will get better and Scrooge can help them because Tiny Tim needs it also their family.
Good job with your summary and opinion, Aldo. I also have to agree with you, Scrooge is most likely feeling horrible because he treated Bob poorly and didn't pay him a fair amount of money. He however might start to give him more money know that he knows Tiny Tim is ill and could die. Scrooge might also even start to interact with Bob more because he now knows what Bob is going through. Also, its true, the ghost of christmas present seems nicer than the ghost of christmas past.
ReplyDeleteOverall Aldo you did a great job with your blog post. I agree with you that Scrooge feels bad for Bob and the way he treated him. He paid him a very poorly amount of money to Bob because they just had enough money to eat. He also might pay him more because the spirit told him that he is probably going to die and feels bad for him. I would not say that the spirit is nicer because I think they were both the same. Overall Aldo you did a great job I would just add a gif or a meme.
ReplyDeleteI think that you summary was really good Aldo, I think that it is up to expectations, a couple of blog post ago, they were good, but not great, but now I think that is is great. I agree with you as well that Scrooge feels bad that Tiny Tim will die, and he knows it to, and does nothing to help him. Basically Scrooge regrets paying Bob Cratchit not enough money to help Tiny Tim, and help Bob provide for his big family. I do also agree that Scrooge knows that it would be his fault if Tiny Tim dies, because he does not pay Bob enough for him to pay the doctor, and save Tiny Tim's life. Overall I think that you have done a great job on this blog post, good job Aldo.
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